The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart gives information about the CO2 emissions per individual in 4

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40 years.

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, the UK ranked first in 2007 and

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Sweden and Portugal stood

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respectively. The United Kingdom started from just under 122 metric

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in 1967 and saw a moderate drop during those years and in 2007, it reached just over 8. Going forward to Sweden, it stood

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8 and experienced a dramatic rise by 2

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and peaked at over 10.

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, it decreased dramatically from 1077 to 2007 and reached under 6 tons which was the same amount for Portugal.

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Italy and Portugal hit just over 44 and under 2 in 1967 respectively and they witnessed a substantial rose until 22007.

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, the former had an overtake in 1987 whit Sweden and got over 6.

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1987 and rose minimally and

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it reached under 6 in 1997 and remained stable.

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