In today’s time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinions.

These days, every
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you learn about studies on the internet. Many
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people
want to
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the courses
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at
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their
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, rather than going to the classroom and
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a lot of
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to
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what
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they can achieve with just one or two
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!
However
, some
people
believe that teaching and
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studying
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situation
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and connecting closely with the mentor or the teacher could be more helpful than seating in the house and watching the monitor to get the knowledge.
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both views,
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I think going to the classroom could be more effective and I will support my opinion with examples. One of the main reasons that some
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, especially young adults say studying from
home
is the best way of learning is that, when you stay
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home
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, you can save more money and more
time
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self, so what I mean by
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is that when you need to go out, you have to tolerate the
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traffic
and paying for
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, transportation, gas fee and so on, but if you study online and just
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remain in your room, all of
this
costs will be
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dropped
. Another reason that technology fans would like to prefer the E-class is that you can access
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the recorded file of
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again and again what you need to
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on that more,
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it is possible that you get
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and could not to thinking about the subject that has been
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structure, so you can turn
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your system and see
this
lesson other
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you get better. Turning to the other sides of
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the argument
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, everyone knows that a generation ago the
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spending
of
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spread
spreading
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knowledge had been
more
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slower than now, but the accuracy and confidence of the old students who really studied their tasks
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considerably more than
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era. so one of the main
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positives
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courses in the class is that you have to be all ears and eyes because there is not any next chance to review
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courses.
Secondly
, studying in the classroom education
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you an opportunity to
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with more
people
around you and
as a result
you can
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many
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people
who
doing
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their
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from
home
and online on the internet have some problem like homesickness,
To sum up
,
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I think the advantages of studying in the
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and connecting with other
people
and our teachers could be more helpful and
this
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method
would be more
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,
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because when you
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online it seems that you need to
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hundred
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times more than
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class.
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youu
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you
need to
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up the pros and the cons of
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both views. But in my
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the
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benefits
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in terms
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a class
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class
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classes
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in school or university is out weight any
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.
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