Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that a
country
can benefit from mandatory local
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employment inside the
country
, especially in today's modern world.
However
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the issue is not entirely straightforward and arguments can
also
be made against the idea. We will
disscuss
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discuss
both sides of the debate and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who support domestic employment of original
country
traines
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trainers
trained
trains
cite the various benefits the idea can bring to the
country
. These range from workforce
fullfilment
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fulfilment
to improvement in the
country
's industry.
For example
, graduates of universities can help companies to produce
high quality
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products that
contibute
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contribute
to a
country
's
all round
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development. Another argument is the funds a
country
dedicates to these
professional
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in order to educate and train them, meaning that, if they leave the
country
, the budgets would be gone with them as well.
By contrast
, opponents of
this
view point out not all
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skilled people are living in a situation where keeping them would be advisable or even possible. Examples can be seen in cases that might not be enough companies who
requires
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their skills, meaning that they would be unemployed, if they were forced to stay in
country
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, or they would be employed in a job that their
expertiess
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expertise
expertises
is not required.
Furthermore
, some
poeple
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people
live in unstable countries
due to
financial or political
turbulances
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turbulence
turbulences
. For these countries, employees might suffer
insufficent
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insufficient
salary
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,
thus
it would be unfair to obligate them to stay.
Overall
,
due to
such
issue
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issues
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as unemployment and
under paid
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saleries
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salaries
the decision to enforce
law
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to keep experts inside a
country
should be based on a
persons
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situation and the jobs available in the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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