In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

People have different views on what they believe is the most essential to spend money on.

While

some suggest that it is important to

use

a large proportion of the budget on building new railroads which can facilitate faster transportation of trains, I argued that more revenue should be spent on renovating existing

transport

. On one hand, there are numerous reasons why individuals argue that it is best to

use

resources to construct

a new railways

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a new railway

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to ensure the smooth movement of trains.

Firstly

if there are enough rails it will enable a majority of the public to

use

them when travelling,

this

can go a long way to reduce the huge traffic on roads caused by large numbers of people driving cars.

Also

when there

is

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more elevators it helps citizens to be punctual, as they have easy access to alternative means of migrating aside from using motorways.

This

development would result in an increase in

productivity

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the productivity

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of the country at large since workers will be able to get to work on time and are able to meet deadlines. For ,example the building of many railroads in Kumasi has boosted production in the area because all work is completed on time because most workers get to work early.

On the other hand

, I am of the opinion that it is even more beneficial to spend huge sums of money on renovating old public

transport

. I am saying

this

because public buses can carry large numbers of passengers at a time which can substantially reduce tension crested on roads by the high figure of private cars. Again rebranding these buses would help citizens to develop an interest in using the for migration as it might discourage folk from using their own vehicles.

Furthermore

, I believe that improving local

transport

would help reduce accident that occurs

due to

lack of maintenance, there allowing

government

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to save fund which could be spent on treatment for other important projects In conclusion, individuals have various views on what they see it is important to receive more attention.

Whereas

the majority say it is necessary to

use

more resources on making new elevators to ensure trains move faster, I believe renovating public

transport

is more valuable.