Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
People
would say that becoming a celebrity such
as in film
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the film
likewise
. I believe that being a celebrity provide
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provides
people
to have variety
of merits rather than problems.
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a variety
To begin
with, the
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celebrities
can have more rare opportunities than others. Obviously, they have a
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celebrities
at their workplace and they can have an experience which other people
cannot in the
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For instance
, a famous actor who works in film
industry basically produces a movie with other famous actors and Correct article usage
the film
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Additionally
, they are invited in
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which
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company
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the company
Therefore
, being a celebrity has a great benefits
than being not famous.
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great benefits
a great benefit
Furthermore
, being famous people
is admired by many people
because most of them are professional
in a certain field and they can always encourage many individuals. As a matter of fact, most Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
of
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celebrities
became famous with Add an article
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otherwise
it is tough to keep being a top-notch person in a field. For example
, professional
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the professional
then
they give many people
an
energy and excitement through how they maintained their effort, their play and their remarks in their interviews.
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To conclude
, I can definitely say that being a famous individual brings more benefits than negative outcomes because the
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celebrities
can have a chance to have an experience which nobody usually can and they can encourage many people
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