Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
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provides
people
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of merits rather than problems.
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celebrities
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celebrities
at their workplace and they can have an experience which other Use synonyms
people
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film
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the film
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company
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a great benefits
than being not famous.
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people
because most of them are Use synonyms
professional
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professionals
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celebrities
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the celebrities
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otherwise
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To conclude
, I can definitely say that being a famous individual brings more benefits than negative outcomes because Linking Words
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celebrities
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