In many country, crime novels and dramas are becoming more popular. Why these books and tv are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction dramas?

The violence
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dramas and mystery novels might appear pointless compared with
non fiction
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nonfiction
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documentary shows and
autobiography
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.
However
,
although
these are fake stories, a vast of people are keen on reading and watching them . Personally, these are
dengerous
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dangerous
since it has problematic samples, which could be mimicked by the viewers, yet
its
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extraordinary topics entertain individuals. The main reason why people desire to watch them is an interest in
thrilling
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.
This
is because
a
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murder is unrealistic.
Therefore
,
ones
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are able to discover
a
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the
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mentality of criminals in the
safety
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environment
such
as living rooms.
Furthermore
,
curiousity
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curiosity
to solve puzzles is a great conversation opener.
For example
, there is a
family friendly
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family-friendly
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crime
animation in Japan called Great
investigator
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CONAN, and it is watched regardless of age.
Thus
, the director hoped the show and sharing expectations make family time valuable, and the scheme went right. Now, it has been a
long run
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series for 30 years. From my perspective
of
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crime
fiction amusement is influential. As the show
display
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the way of
crime
, it is likely to be attempted. What is more, especially minors are inclined not to judge good and evil.
For instance
,
a
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devastating criminal in Japan in 1997 that a student killed by a classmate exactly the same way as
a
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the
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movie
showed
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, and the attempted juvenile's affidavit is it is okay
due to
the actor, who is acting as a
murder
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did the same on the screen.
Therefore
the movie resulting in banned,
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and violence
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violence
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movies sets limited
age
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. In conclusion,
crime
stories are exciting and enjoyable for everyone unless individuals copy
the
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their
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actions. People ought to understand properly
that is
entertainment
otherwise
it leads to
produce
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criminals.
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