In many country, crime novels and dramas are becoming more popular. Why these books and tv are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction dramas?
The violence
dramas and mystery novels might appear pointless compared with Correct article usage
Violence
non fiction
documentary shows and Correct your spelling
nonfiction
autobiography
. Fix the agreement mistake
autobiographies
However
, although
these are fake stories, a vast of people are keen on reading and watching them . Personally, these are dengerous
since it has problematic samples, which could be mimicked by the viewers, yet Correct your spelling
dangerous
its
extraordinary topics entertain individuals.
The main reason why people desire to watch them is an interest in Correct pronoun usage
their
thrilling
. Replace the word
thrill
This
is because a
murder is unrealistic. Remove the article
apply
Therefore
, ones
are able to discover Correct your spelling
one
a
mentality of criminals in the Correct article usage
the
safety
environment Replace the word
safe
such
as living rooms. Furthermore
, curiousity
to solve puzzles is a great conversation opener. Correct your spelling
curiosity
For example
, there is a family friendly
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family-friendly
crime
animation in Japan called Great investigator
CONAN, and it is watched regardless of age. Correct your spelling
Investigator
Thus
, the director hoped the show and sharing expectations make family time valuable, and the scheme went right. Now, it has been a long run
series for 30 years.
From my perspective Add a hyphen
long-run
of
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apply
crime
fiction amusement is influential. As the show display
the way of Correct subject-verb agreement
displays
crime
, it is likely to be attempted. What is more, especially minors are inclined not to judge good and evil. For instance
, a
devastating criminal in Japan in 1997 that a student killed by a classmate exactly the same way as Change preposition
in a
a
movie Correct article usage
the
showed
, and the attempted juvenile's affidavit is it is okay Change the form of the verb
showing
due to
the actor, who is acting as a murder
did the same on the screen. Replace the word
murderer
Therefore
the movie resulting in banned, Correct word choice
and violence
violence
movies sets limited Replace the word
violent
age
.
In conclusion, Add the particle
to age
crime
stories are exciting and enjoyable for everyone unless individuals copy the
actions. People ought to understand properly Change the word
their
that is
entertainment otherwise
it leads to produce
criminals.Wrong verb form
producing
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