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Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world What are the advantages and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking the same language?

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Nowadays, the global
language
 barrier has become an obstacle to communication. Even with the help of technology, it is still a challenge to communicate in different
languages
.
Such
 diversity in
culture
 and
languages
 leads to the question, would it be better if the
world
 had
one
 global
language
?
This
 essay will explore both sides of the question. Having a single global
language
 comes with a number of benefits. A single globalized
language
 could resolve all problems caused by the
language
 barrier,
such
 as translation errors. Communication between nations would not be an issue. Children would pick up the
language
 from their parents. And students will have more time to explore other subjects, as they have
one
language
 to study, and
this
 will create the opportunity for students to access higher education.
On the other hand
, some might argue that having
one
language
 causes more harm than good.
Language
 is a reflection of
culture
. Having
one
language
 dulls the
culture
 and prevents cultural differences. Without
culture
, the
world
 could seem boring and pointless.
Moreover
, fewer cultures impact life, which means less creativity, resulting in a lifeless
world
.
In addition
, the
world
's history would be gone, for they are in ancient
languages
. Without any successors of ancient
languages
, many cultures would lose their entire identity. In conclusion, the idea of having
one
language
 might seem the ideal way to tackle the
world
's hardest problems. Yet, the consequence of the said solution would inevitably bring more problems. So, we should adore and appreciate the beauty of having diverse cultures and
languages
.
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