The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph clearly illustrates the
proportion
of the population aged 65 years and above in the USA, Sweden, and Japan from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
, it is obvious that the rates of old people
in all three
countries
showed a slow increment from 1940 to 2030. However
, the proportion
of elderly people
in the three
countries
will experience a rapid surge to more than 20% after 2030.
In America, there was almost 10% of elders proportion
in 1940 which is the highest percentage
among the three
countries
. Then
it grew steadily until 1980. During 1980-2020 the percentage
of old people
in the USA remained steady. However
, it will increase sharply after 2030. The United States is expected to have the lowest percentage
of the elderly population among the three
countries
.
In 1940 the percentage
of old people
in Japan was 5%, but it steadily declined until 1960 then
it remained evenly over two decades. After mid-1980
Japan’s Correct article usage
the mid-1980
proportion
of elders grew to nearly 10 %. the rate of old people
in Japan is expected to be extremely rapid surge and will take the highest rates.
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