The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The given line
graph
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provides information about the number of consumed meats
such
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as
chicken
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,
beef
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, lamb and fish in the twenty-five years period which starts with 1979.
Overall
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, it is clear from the
graph
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that eaten
grams
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of
beef
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and lamb had a considerable downward trend
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to the
chicken
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. Turning to the details, the amount consumed of lamb was 150
grams
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per person every week , but
this
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number was followed by a gradual drop and fluctuation in 1984 and 1989 respectively,
whereas
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during
this
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period , the
consumption
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of
beef
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fluctuated wildly. 1994 and 1999 witnessed a dramatic decrease in
grams
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of eaten
beef
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by European countries. And in 2004, both
consumption
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of lambs and portions of
beef
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levelled off after a steady change. In general,
consumption
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fish was almost unchanged after a little decline,
while
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eaten
grams
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of
chicken
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rose till 1989 after a brief reduction.
Consumption
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of fish was low on the line
graph
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throughout the period and it had a tiny downward change,
whereas
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the amount of consumed
chicken
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in 2004 reached a peak in the whole
graph
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and approximately 250
grams
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of
chicken
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was eaten by every person per week.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, chicken, beef, grams, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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