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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two tables inform the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from universities across the nation in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 for two different years, 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the data that transfer
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student
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students
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 from universities in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 increased significantly from 2007 to 2009. The
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students
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number of students
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 who went for
exchange
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 from
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 increased from 189 in 2007 to 226 in 2009.
In contrast
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, the
student
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 who came from
Australia
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 to
Europe
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 countries stagnant with the same figure of 152 in 2007 and 2009. French has the highest
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exchange
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number of exchange
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student
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 from
Australia
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 and
likewise
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, had 61
students
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 who went abroad to
Australia
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while
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 it was 37
students
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 came to France in 2007. In 2009, the
number
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 of a French
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student
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students
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 who went to
Australia
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 changed to only 60
students
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in contrast
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 to the total of
Australian
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Australians
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 that came to France which uplifted to 58
students
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. Some countries encountered decreased, stagnant hiked changes in the
exchange
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student
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number
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 who went to and came from
Australia
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. The Netherlands was the country which had a major downturn
number
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 of
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student
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students
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 from
Australia
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 from 32 in 2007 to 18 in 2009.
Then
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, the
student
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number
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 from German to
Australia
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 was significantly lifted from 27 in 2007 to 62 in 2009.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, exchange, students, europe, australia, student with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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