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The chants below show the result of survey about what People of different age group Bay makes them most happy.

#chants #show #survey #people #age #group #bay
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 and doing hobbles, chile
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travelling
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group
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achievement
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achievements
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 at work
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after
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age
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 decrease of about 82x to 31.
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doing hobbies from the
age
 group of under and over 30 24% and 23% respectively. with regards to the remaining factors, there was 18% of
people
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happy
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 appearance.
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people
 above 30 made happy thems
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