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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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In today’s society,
energy
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 requirements have become critical for the existence of humankind.
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 is leading to the fast depletion of fossil fuels to meet
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 humongous requirement.
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 essay will explore how we can protect these finite
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 and what substitutes can be used in place of these natural
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. To answer the first question on how to conserve these
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 we need to understand the biggest reason for
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 exploitation of fossil fuels is financial. Hydrocarbons are the most available and economically viable
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 to meet our
energy
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 requirements, they are not infinite in nature
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 unchecked usage will result in exhausting these
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. We can conserve these by diversifying our fossil fuel demands
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 as hydro
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 which are cheaper and developing new technologies to generate
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 solar or wind-powered electricity generation To answer our next question on what are the
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viable
available
substitues
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substitutes
. We can use green and sustainable
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 which is
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 known as renewable
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 to ,say they are infinite and will not exhaust. Many countries are using these already some examples are India generates a lot of its
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 using solar
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, and Bhutan generates electricity using water which is
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 called hydropower. Some Western countries use nuclear reactors to generate
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 using steam. There are various other methods that are been researched by scientists to reduce our dependencies on fossil fuels. In conclusion,
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 it is tempting to use fossil electricity for
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 generation
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 various factors mainly economic factors. If we don’t conserve these
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 by using alternatives, we will lose them forever.
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 it is important that we conserve these
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 for future generations. In my view with the new advancement ,
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technology we will be able to conserve our fossil fuel reserves and the whole world should work together to solve
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 issue.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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