The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graphic shows the average carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person
in the United Kingdom
, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, the United Kingdom
keeps the highest carbon
dioxide
emissions
of those four countries. It was about 11 metric tons per person
from 1967 to 1977. Although
the carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person
during the next 30 years
were kept going down to approximately 9 metric tonnes
at a slow speed, the United Kingdom
was still the country that have the highest CO2 emissions
per person
Once Sweden
had the second highest carbon
dioxide
emissions
but after 50 years
it was down to the third one with Portugal and Italy taking second place. Sweden
, once its CO2 emissions
just had about 1 metric tonne lower than the United Kingdom
, but after 1977, this
CO2 emissions
per person
of this
country kept decreasing. When in 2007, it only have approximately 5 metric tonnes
per person
.
In Italy, the data on the carbon
dioxide
emission per person
kept increasing every year. In the first ten years
, its climbs to 6 CO2 emissions
in metric tonnes
. And after the next 20 years
, it grew very slowly and the data was as some as Sweden
in 1987.
The data for Portugal kept rising rapidly, it grew to 3 metric tonnes
per person
when the time cameChange preposition
in
carbon
dioxide
emissions
per person
every year without any decrease sign, Portugal finally
has the same dioxide
emissions
as Sweden
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