Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

It is suggested that we tend to inherit our personalities from our parents and we do not have a chance to alter them. I do not support

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view. Admittedly, some

traits

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come to us through our genes.

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, if

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the baby

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has

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an anxious

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personality from a young age, it is definitely connected

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child’s

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genes, as he or she can not develop

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a characteristic at

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age.

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, it is proven by several scientists that genetic factors affect the formation of our

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and particular characteristics can

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with the help of our genetic makeup.

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, I believe that

people

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have an opportunity to change their character

traits

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.

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, when I was a child, I suffered from public fear and a sense of anxiety,

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I tried some methods to modify these

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such

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as

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attending more and more parties and communicating with a lot of

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. After all, these actions helped me to

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extrovert

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person, which means that our characteristic is changeable and

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are not fixed before we are born. Another proof against

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theory is that some personalities can be created with the help of

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level of exposure to the surroundings. When children,

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, are surrounded by naughty friends, they tend to be afflicted by

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case, leading to the creation of unrespectful and rude

attitude

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towards other

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.

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,

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around

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individual

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can play

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role to mould one’s personality. In conclusion, it is worth admitting that there

are

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a link between genes and having different personalities, yet I believe that character

traits

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are not irrevocable, as personal experiences and some actions can change them completely.