the diagram below shows the production of olive oil

the diagram below shows the production of olive oil
The diagram depicts information on how to produce olive
oil
from the
collecting
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and final delivery to the customers.
Overall
, it can be seen that
process
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the process
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consists of 7 main steps In the beginning, with human help, the
oil
seed is picked
the
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fruits from the tree and goes to
rinsing
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a rinsing
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special machine to wash with cold water.
Then
, cleaned olives are sent to another machine using the belt to smash and out of
this
abstracted two seeds and olive paste. As a next step, remove the seeds paste
that is
ready to pack in the bag with holes. Those bags will be shipped with high pressure through a machine in order to get rid of excess water from the
oil
.
Finally
, the olive
oil
product
go
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through packaging and as the
last
step
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it will be delivered to the stores and sale.
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