the diagram below shows the production of olive oil
The diagram depicts information on how to produce olive
oil
from the Use synonyms
collecting
and final delivery to the customers. Replace the word
collection
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
process
consists of 7 main steps
In the beginning, with human help, the Correct article usage
the process
oil
seed is picked Use synonyms
the
fruits from the tree and goes to Change preposition
from the
rinsing
special machine to wash with cold water. Correct article usage
a rinsing
Then
, cleaned olives are sent to another machine using the belt to smash and out of Linking Words
this
abstracted two seeds and olive paste. As a next step, remove the seeds paste Linking Words
that is
ready to pack in the bag with holes.
Those bags will be shipped with high pressure through a machine in order to get rid of excess water from the Linking Words
oil
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the olive Linking Words
oil
product Use synonyms
go
through packaging and as the Change the verb form
goes
last
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step
it will be delivered to the stores and sale.Add a comma
,step
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