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Nowadays, international tourism in the biggest industry in the world. unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays a wide range of
people
 love travelling worldwide,
hence
, personally from my point of view, I disagree with that, international
tourism
 did not create any tension,
therefore
, I feel
this
 way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. I firmly believe that international
tourism
 has positive effects on any
country
,
therefore
,
tourism
 creates a good feeling inside
people
 , living in
this
country
 that
tourism
 comes in,
secondly
, there is no bad feeling between habitats and
tourism
,
for instance
, I know a lot of British
People
 travel to Marrakech, Morroco,those tourists bringing a lot of knowledge and cultures,
also
, leading the economics system recycled well on a positive way,
nevertheless
, there is no tension.
as a consequence
, others agree with that by saying international
tourism
 creates tension,
moreover
, some international
tourism
 don't respect the
country
 to which they want to travel,
also
, creates a bad feeling about other religions ,
in addition
, they don't respect
people
 they live in
this
country
 where the
tourism
 come,
for example
,
last
 year I see some
tourism
 throwing rubbish into the street without any respect for the habitants and nature, that's can create tensions between
people
 from different cultures, in conclusion ,
,
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 I believe that international
tourism
 has positive effects worldwide,
therefore
, helping
people
 for understanding new cultures with suitable languages,
whereas
 the important part is the economic system recycled well, I strongly believe that supports my point of view.
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