Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that over the years we have witnessed a steep rise in sales of high-rise apartments in the cities.
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few
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argue that these flats are not suitable for a happy life, and
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individuals feel isolated, some believe that residing in these units
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own benefits. In
this
essay, I will discuss both
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views, and explain with examples why I agree with the latter argument of
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the advantages
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of
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in condos. One of the primary drawbacks of staying in apartments
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is the feeling of
lonliness
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loneliness
and isolation.
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is mainly because the structure of the building
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such
that there are just
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houses on each floor.
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means very less
people
residing close to each other,
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can interact and build a healthy
relationship
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relationships
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.
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, a survey
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only know their neighbours living on the same floor, because of
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convenience
. Over
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time,
this
may result in
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feeling of community feeling.
On the other hand
, the lifestyle of owners of these big condos is very comfortable. The basic amenities
such
as swimming pools, club-house,
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, etc. are available within the society premises, and
people
take full advantage of these facilities.
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, if a person had to travel 30 minutes to go out for
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exercise in
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, he may bail out.
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studio was just outside his building, the probability of him going there is much higher.
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, I strongly believe that a happy life depends more on the love and warmth among the family members, and not on the type of house they live in. If there are
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in the family,
people
would feel unhappy anywhere they live. In conclusion,
while
owners of the apartment may feel lonely
due to
less interaction with neighbours, in my opinion, the benefits of living in these sky-touching buildings are far more,
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the availibility
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availibility
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availability
of luxurious facilities and a higher standard of living.
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