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Some believe that in many nations, it is necessary to spend a lot of money to build new railway infrastructure for fast trains between cities. Others feel that the government should spend money to improve existing public transportation. Discuss both of these perspectives and give your opinion.

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Transportation
 is important in
decade
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. It is universally two
view
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. The first opinion is folk believe that the among of money spend to build new railway
substructur
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substructure
substructures
 for fast train between cities. The second sight is some
people
 claim to improve public
transportation
. The following essay takes a look at both sides of
argument
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the argument
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. We live in
modern
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 society, regarding the fact that
community
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communities
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 need
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an instrument
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instrument
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to
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 urban renewal. The first idea has a good benefit,
for
instance
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this
 issue will save time and
people
 will
less
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 tired on their trips.
On the other
hand
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 government must be
disbursing
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 as much as money now, to construct novel railway infrastructure. More
over
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certain
people
 have less tripped so it is not
priority
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a priority
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 for territory.
Therefore
i
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 strongly disagree with the given idea that the countries do
this
 project.
In
addition
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 others feel that nations ought to pay off
fund
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 to modify
transportation
 because it is one of the most important issues in
decade
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a decade
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. Without a shadow of
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a dooubt
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doubt
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this
 layout is gain for every
people
 include poor
people
, wealthy
crowd
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 and staff.
this
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 facilities cause comfortable and welfare in
population
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.
On the other
hand
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 the mayor of each area will have to obtain
expert
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experts
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, budget and correct scheduling for
this
 plan.
To sum
up
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 both
point
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 of view
are
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an advantage
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advantage
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 for society but to be totally honest
i
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 prefer that the municipalities spend Money to reclaim public
transportation
 for
whole
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 population. Should burgomasters establish better equipment for transfer,
every one
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 can use and enjoy carrying.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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