You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter ▪ describe the incident ▪ explain how this incident affected you ▪ suggest what could be done about it

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my disappointment with the service. That you had provided by the public transport. I had recently travelled from Madurai to Chennai on 22/04/2023 at 6.00 am

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. I

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departed from Madurai during my travel. I felt that the Air conditioner

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was

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not working

properly

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properly,

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we had 6

hours

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6-hour

journey on the

bus

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. All the passengers on the

bus

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fell

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felt

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terribly hot and were not able to breathe

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the lack of ventilation in the

Bus

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. Because of

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this

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this,

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my blood pressure increased

and

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, and

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suddenly I

get

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apply

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fainted on the

bus

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suddenly

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suddenly,

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the

bus

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stopped at the other corner of the road.

some

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fellow passengers

call

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called

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the ambulance.

they

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had been admitted to the hospital.

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is the worst situation I

had

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have

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ever faced

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apply

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. I need to bring some suggestions to your attention

for not happen

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to prevent it from happening

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in future. Can you ask your staff to check that all the functions are in condition and working before they start

and

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, and

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also

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keep

regularLy

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regular

inspections on

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hope that you look into

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issue and make some changes to the incident Thank you Yours Faithfully Ram

arunramrvs

Apr 21, 2023

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structure

Be clear in one order: tell what happened, how you felt, and what you want the company to do. Use short, easy to read sentences.

coherence

Put each idea in its own paragraph. Use simple link words like 'first', 'then', 'also', 'finally' to join sentences.

content

The letter shows the purpose to ask for change.

presentation

It starts with a greeting and ends with a closing.

content

It mentions a real trip with time, which adds detail.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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