The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The linear graph represents the count of people a specific Caribbean island receives between 2010 and 2017.
We can observe most visitors from 2013 to 2015 are staying on the island and the count is 1.5,
however
in 2016 it declined marginally, only to rise back to 1.5 again in 2017. There is minimal variation in the proportion. Contrastingly, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships from 2011 to 2012 had a minimum decline, but it hiked from there in every corresponding year. Interestingly, in 2016 and 2017 it surpassed the number of tourists on cruises. The major significance of this
graph is the proportion of tourists visiting this
island is continuously on the rise, though it remained equal in 2015 and 2016, and again in 2017 it rose.Submitted by anupriyahalder on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!