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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the hystory of the house or buolding they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can pepole research this?

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In some places around the world, there are people that are starting to grow
intrest
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interested
 to figure out the
hystory
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history
 of their home or building themself.
Overall
, there are some people that
firt
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first
fit
 of all enjoy
hystory
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history
 and second the place where you live, your home has
a
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value so
knwowing
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knowing
 about it or making yourself it makes it more yours.
Nevertheless
, there are some buildings or houses that
dosen'
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doesn't
t
 have
a
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 background to reach and it's just
a
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building. Meanwhile,
this
 information can
revel
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reveal
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 some
intresting
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interesting
 facts and data.
This
 could
be reach
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 with some architects or
arqueologist
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archaeologist
 that were included in the building or
kwon
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knew
 the
hystory
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history
 of the area.
However
,
dependening
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depending
the
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 place maybe the specific house
dosen'
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doesn't
t
 have
a antecedents
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 but the town has
for example
, your house isn'
t
 the white house but it could be in Manhattan
that
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 is a very famous area.
On the other hand
, there are many citizens that just look for a place to live and don'
t
 care about the story behind meanwhile,
theres
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there's
this
 new groups of people that are
staring
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starting
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 to care about
this
 type of information and making their home more of
their
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theirs
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.
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