Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in t.v, video games and other types of entertainment for children’s leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?
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children
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content
TVs
, Video games and other social media applications. It is understandable that these strong and Fix the agreement mistake
TV
stimulate
materials can be popular for all generations, but I believe that they need some limitations, especially for the young.
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negative
although
they do not want it. At first,
children
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children
who watched someone hit a doll do the violent action when they meet another doll, but others who watched a doll is complimented do taking care of it instead
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Moreover
, When people are exposed to violent
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situations
becuase
of the powerful stimulation to the brain. Our brains eliminate positive ideas Correct your spelling
because
due to
negative feelings.
Although
, we all know many problems of this
situation, it is not easy to solve them. Here are some ways to control the situation. From the start, the easiest method is the block access of
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to
children
who are not supposed to see. We can enact a law about showing age
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medias
which are popular for the youth, but there are not many effective laws related to these new communication tools. Correct your spelling
media
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young
generation understand the importance of positive content usage. Controlling and blocking can not cure the root of problems. We can encourage them to protect themselves from the crucial world.
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the young
children
. We need to make a law about access
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