The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how often the population in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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, it can be clearly seen that the majority of citizens consumed fast food once a week and once or twice a month throughout the period,
whereas
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very few people had taken meals there every day and never are approximately around or under 5%.
According to
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the chart, people who ate several times a week increased by around 3% between 2003 to 2006.
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it experienced a slight decrease to roughly 16%. For those who ate once a week slightly increased from around 31% to nearly 33%. Later it dropped to roughly 28%. The percentage of folk who had eaten once or twice a month fell from 30% to 25% between 2003 to 2006. After that, it presented a sudden increase to around 8% in 2013. Citizens who ingested a few
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a year in 2003 were well over 10% and
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jumped to 15% in 2006 and 2013.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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