Some believe that advances in technology are increasing the gap between rich and poor while others think the opposite is happening. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days

technology

is getting more advances in many categories. The question is, Is

technology

better for the poor or the rich? In

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essay, I am going to discuss

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subject and I will draw what I believe. In terms of advantages for the rich, The rich can get a lot of benefits from

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technology

. The main reason given to support

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claim is that the rich can use

technology

for their work in any place of the world, To illustrate, They could buy and sell their items if they have a tread.

However

, The poor can earn more money through

technology

,

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, They can make a company via websites.

Moreover

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technology

can anybody

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, Because we can find it in any area of the world.

Also

, Now the poor are nearing to be rich,

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Arabia 30 per cent of the citizen earn money from computer games. In conclusion, opinions

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person to person and that depend on the thinking. I consider that

technology

is better for two sides, But, it is extremely beneficial to the poor

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Because they can get some information

technology

about how to earn money from many sources. nort ontr

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