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Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future

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It is believed by most people that the model of the EU is the future, with
countries
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 gradually joining together into larger units.
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, the taxes and prices drop when being part of a free-trade area. With the taxes and prices being low, the economy of the
countries
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 in the EU will go smoothly. Another advantage is the ability to travel freely across
countries
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.
This
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 way, everyone can go on vacations, study abroad or work in a foreign
country
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. With the ability to travel, people would be able to learn more about the traditions and culture of the host
country
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.
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, transnationalism is a widespread word worldwide. By being in a foreign
country
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 you learn how to take care of yourself without any help. By becoming a migrant there are many challenges you face like only seeing your family and loved ones only on your phone screen.
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, by living on that model, natives and migrants lose their traditional culture and
EU
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the EU
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 makes the
countries
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 look alike, lose their own money and accept the euro currency. By losing all those different for every
country
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 things, there will be no reason to study about other
countries
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 or even visit them. The national sense will be gone and may never be brought back.

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