The table below shows the percentages of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table
compare
the proportion of people who rode bicycles by Change the verb form
compares
age
and gender in 2011.
Overall
, children under nine years old used the bicycle most in both gender, While
, middle age
people least
likely to Add a missing verb
were least
rise
a bicycle. Correct your spelling
ride
Additionally
, Womens
tended to cycle more than Correct your spelling
women
a
men during the given period.
among Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
women
children under nine years Add a comma
,women
shows
Change the verb form
show
intreast
to ride a bicycle with 51.4%. Correct your spelling
interest
However
, with the older groups rates were only 42.2% for teenagers aged from 10 to 17 and 17% of
people aged between 18 and 39. the proportion of 40 to Change preposition
for
50 year old
man Add a hyphen
50-year-old
cyclisit
was the lowest, at just 12%,
The percentage of girls under the Correct your spelling
cyclist
age
nine
who cycled was slightly higher than the man of the same Change preposition
of nine
age
at 52%. However
, Correct article usage
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figue
for girls aged 10 to 17 was just under Correct your spelling
figure
figures
the
quarter. The figure shows Correct article usage
a
almost
similar Add an article
the almost
percentage
in the Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
age
group of 18 to 39 and more than 40 -59 with 9.7% and 8.0% respectively.Submitted by madhavansubase on
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