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Some students take one years off between school and university.Do advantages outweigh disadvantages??

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There is no doubt that these days a lot of
people
 get 1
year
 before
university
. The question is, What are the negatives and the positives about leaving one
year
 between the
university
 and the
school
? In
this
 essay, I am going to draw some of the advantages and disadvantages. In terms of the advantages, Leaving one
year
 between the
university
 and
school
 will be good Because the students will get rest and they can think about their future subject. To illustrate, In Saudi ,Arabia 50 per cent of
people
 have 1
year
 before
university
.
In other words
, The student will get enough time to choose their subject.
However
, when they have a
year
 between the
school
 and the
university
 it will give some issues for them.
In other words
, They will lose 1
year
 of their life without any achievement.
Also
, if they get a
year
 without any study they will forget what they studied. In conclusion,
While
 there are disadvantages, My own view is that we all need to the off it will be our rest and
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 to the
university
. My opinion is the off it is extremely good
to
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 us in my country.
However
, I believe that the government should take necessary measures to ensure that
people
 make the right choice of the off between
university
 and
school
. ,
,
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 it depends on the person and the differences between the
people
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