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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the results of
research
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 on how and how many
people
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 consume
coffee
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 or tea in some Australian
cities
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. The
research
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 was done in the following five
cities
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: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart.
Overall
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, folk prefers to go to a cafe for their drinks in most
cities
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. The trend
also
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 shows that individuals most likely would buy an instant
coffee
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, rather than a fresh one. Three
cities
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 (Sydney,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart) look pretty much the same percentage-wise. In all of them, more than 60% of
people
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 visited a cafe to buy
coffee
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 or tea during the
last
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 4 weeks. The next liked drink in these
cities
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 is instant
coffee
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, more than 45% of
people
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 bought it in Sydney and Melbourne, and in Hobart, the number is just under 55%. Two other
cities
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also
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 share some similarities. In both Brisbane and
Adelaide
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, less than 35% of individuals bought fresh
coffee
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 throughout the
last
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 28 days, and it is the lowest value among all
cities
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 included in the
research
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. It should be mentioned,
however
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, that
Adelaide
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 is the only city, where
people
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 prefer instant
coffee
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 the most; around 50% did it during the
research
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 period.
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