Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller buildings. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?
In
the
recent Correct article usage
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years
the increasing population has been a major concern for all Add a comma
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the
countries. Both solutions Correct article usage
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has
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have
it's
own advantages but as per what I think in the above situation building taller Replace the word
its
buildings
would be a better solution.
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This
solution is feasible as by providing people with taller Linking Words
buildings
rather than building on wider areas we would be saving a whole lot Use synonyms
a
Correct your spelling
of
land
. The Use synonyms
land
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Linking Words
then
can be used for more productive purposes Replace the word
than
for example
- farming, promoting industrialization and Linking Words
for
many more activities. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
building Linking Words
houses
on wider areas of Use synonyms
land
would mean a Use synonyms
lot
construction which leads to Air and Add the preposition
oflot
Land
pollution. Building multiple Use synonyms
houses
Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
wider
area would contribute to high construction Correct article usage
a wider
cost
. The ultimate goal of any city is to preserve Fix the agreement mistake
costs
land
rather than Use synonyms
building
Wrong verb form
build
houses
.
Taller Use synonyms
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
Add the comma(s)
, on the other hand,
on the other hand
would require less Linking Words
land
and the construction would be rather fast than building Use synonyms
on
wider areas. How about Change preposition
in
a
illustration, Change the article
an
Due to
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a
increasing population a city has to provide Change the article
an
immedaitely
Correct your spelling
immediately
a
Change the article
an
accomodation
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accommodation
to
100 peopleChange preposition
for
,
if we think practically building a tall building would be Remove the comma
apply
a
easier job than building Change the article
an
a
50 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
houses
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on
Change preposition
in
wider
area. I would not say building tall Add an article
a wider
the wider
building
does not have any bad effect on Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
land
, it has but low when compared to housing Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
wider
Add an article
a wider
the wider
area
.
If we look at the Modern Era we will see that Fix the agreement mistake
areas
young
population enjoy Correct article usage
the young
high
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high-rise
rise
building Use synonyms
along with
Linking Words
the
stay. Most importantly they prefer buying Change the word
their
houses
on high Use synonyms
rise
Use synonyms
building
as they provide Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
with
various facilities like security, Change preposition
apply
gym
, pool etc. Correct article usage
a gym
This
look of young citizens has given more value to Linking Words
high
Add a hyphen
high-rise
rise
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buildings
as compared to low Use synonyms
rise
.
In the Use synonyms
start
we find that both Add a comma
,start
solutuions
can be possible but when Correct your spelling
solutions
Add the particle
to see
see
Change the verb form
seeing
the
Remove the article
apply
it's
Correct your spelling
its
pro's
and Change noun form
pros
con's
a Unnecessary verb
con
lot
confusion is cleared as we see through the illustration given above. The end result is that building taller Add the preposition
oflot
buildings
gives us the most suitable solution for providing housing to people.Use synonyms
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