The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart compares the outcome of a study about individuals'
coffee
and
tea
purchasing and consuming habits in five urban areas in Australia.
Overall
, it is evident that most citizens went to a café for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
4
weeks
while
very few citizens bought fresh
coffee
in the same period.
To begin
,
according to
the results of the survey, Melbourne and Hobart residents we the majority who went to a café for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
4
weeks
with a relatively similar rate of 63% which was by far the largest proportion.
Furthermore
, when it came to instant
coffee
bought in the same period Hobart citizens recorded the highest rate of around 55% which was slightly greater than the rates at which Brisbane residents bought instant
coffee
and went to café for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
4
weeks
each.
In contrast
, throughout the cities of ,Australia very few individuals bought fresh
coffee
in a given time frame as compared to the percentage at which the other were purchased.
Also
, in Adelaide residents who bought instant
coffee
in the
last
4
weeks
percentage was slightly higher than those who went to a café for
coffee
or
tea
in the period of the study.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, café, weeks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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