The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
the diagram illustrates the process by which drinking
water
is produced from rainwater
in a local town in Australia.
overall
, the process of making drinking water
requires 6 stages in total. it starts with rainwater
being collected and culminates when clean water
is delivered to housing areas for consumption after experiencing several steps, including drainage, storage and water
treatment.
to begin
with, rainwater
is initially
collected before being drained via a pipe system. afterwards, rainwater
is transmitted to a container, where it is filtered. the filtered water
is then
moved to a large tank in order to be stored, subsequently
being transferred to the procedure of water
treatment. in this
step, chemicals are added with a view to purifying water
.
the process continues with the final stream of water
being delivered via the pipe system to residential areas. finally
, when water
is ready to be used, it can be taken from taps.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, rainwater with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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