Overconsumption of sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take the responsibility to control sugar intake while others think it is the responsibility of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.opinion about it.

Consuming large amounts of sugary

foods

could result in health problems in the future.

However

, some believe that individuals should be responsible for controlling their

sugar

consumption,

while

others believe

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the

government

's role. In my view, it is the

government

who should regulate the

amount

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of sweet

products

on the market. When people take the notion that each and every person is supposed to make sure that they watch the

amount

of

sugar

they consume, they are usually

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referring

to people who are health

consious

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conscious

. If someone understands the negative effects of taking in a lot of sugars,

they

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they are likely to reduce or stop eating them.

On the other hand

, even if they want to, they find it difficult because there are no other alternatives.

For instance

, there has been a growing concern that most South African school tuckshops sell sweets, chocolates and cakes

instead

of fruits which put the children at risk of

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diseases in the

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long

run. In order that

sugar

intake

is

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reduced, the

government

should

be make

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make

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sure that it controls the

amount

of

sugar

that is

put in

foods

such

as fizzy drinks, juices, alcohol, bread and cakes. These are the

the

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foods

mostly consumed by a large number of people on a daily basis.

This

can be done by introducing

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a sugar-tax

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sugar-tax

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sugar tax

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.

For example

, introducing

this

worked significantly in the UK,

such

that the South African

government

also

introduced it.

As a result

, the companies reduced

amount

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of

sugar

they added to their

products

and as well increased their prices.

Hence

, the consumers couldn't afford to buy them in large quantities.

Besides

these stiff laws, the authorities can

also

regulate the types of

foods

that should be sold in schools

as well as

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sure that sweet items which are normally placed in tills be placed

at

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the back shelves of the supermarkets.

This

prevents impulse buying associated with the purchase of these goods. Moreso, advertisements of

such

products

can be stopped by the

government

and be replaced by healthier

foods

which include vegetables and fruits. In conclusion,

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intake of sugary

foods

results in an unhealthy nation. Even if individuals try to reduce eating them,

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it

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remains a governmental responsibility to

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reduce

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these

products

by regulating production and advertisements.