Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: Invite him/her to a public event in your country. Describe the public event Explain about other plans you have for your friend when she/he will visit

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I hope that you are doing fine and I pray that you have the best of health and happiness. I am writing

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letter to invite you to come to a public

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in my country on March 3rd of 2023. The theme of

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event

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about

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apply

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sneakers, there will be a lot of brands that you will be loved love (tidak menggunakan kalimat pasif) and I think you will buy some pairs of

sneaker

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event

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will be held

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“Sangkareang Garden” in the middle of Mataram city City.

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that sneakers

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, there will be a presentation about how to take care of your sneaker by

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at home. After the presentation

section

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, it will be the question and answer

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with

source

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person and

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section

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will be exited

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you.

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, after the question and answer

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, there will be a performance band from Pee Wee Gaskins and Burgekill. These

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are the guest star

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and

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why you will love those band

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performances

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the

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. I think

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all about

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letter to invite you to

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, I hope you can come to

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with me Best regards Dwitya

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

208 words

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: Invite him/her to a public event in your country. Describe the public event Explain about other plans you have for your friend when she/he will visit

The Greeting

Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. However, there are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the work place. why is this hapenning? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

Some people believe that globalization is beneficial for developing countries, while others argue that it has negative effects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.