The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
The given map depicts Stockefor's
village
in two different years.
Overall
, Stokeford Village
changed significantly. In 2010 the farmland was reduced in all areas, and the apartment was built more in the center
of the suburb.
In 1930, Stokeford had a river that crossed the outskirts of the Change the spelling
centre
village
. The west
of the village
had shops and a post office. The house was still rare and spread in the north and west
area. In the south, there was a big cow province. In the east, the village
had a primary school. The garden is beside the school with some trees and a big house. In the North area, there was another huge cow's province, and on the edge of the suburb, the north side, they had a bridge to cross to the other places.
80 years later, in 2010, Stokeford Village
had some refurbishment. The shops in the west
were rebuilt and became buildings, and some roads were built connected to the main road. All the farmland vanished and became new settlements. The primary school has become bigger than before. Some part of the garden is rebuilt and become apartment. The large house was reconstructed and turned into a retirement for the elderly. The main road is added to some areas connected to the residence in the north, east, south, and west
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