WITH A FAST PACE OF MODERN LIFE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE AE TURING TOWARDS. FAST FOOD FOR THEIR MAIN MEALS .WHATS ARE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF FAST FOOD.
In today's world,
larger
number of people are inclined towards eating fast Add an article
a larger
the larger
food
as main
course. As most members of society find Change the article
the main
this
approach benefical
. Correct your spelling
beneficial
This
essay highlights both the advantages and disadvantage
of consuming junk Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
food
.
Firstly
, technology is becoming progressively universal among all generations and age groups. Advancement in technology,
has provided access to apps that promise to deliver fast Remove the comma
apply
food
to households within few
clicks and with varied options. Correct article usage
a few
For instance
, In India
an app called Add a comma
,India
swiggy
has Change the capitalization
Swiggy
rreported
that the most ordered dish through their platform was pizza by people belonging to different generations each day . Correct your spelling
reported
Therefore
, the convenience offered by these food
delivery solutions have
added to Change the verb form
has
general
public cravings for fast Correct article usage
the general
food
on daily basis rather than maintaining the practice of preparing home cooked
meals.
The major drawback in having Add a hyphen
home-cooked
this
sort of attitude and ordering fast food
from outside regularly is that within some time the health of individuals begin
to deteriorate. Change the verb form
begins
For example
, It has been widely suggested by doctors across the globe to avoid processed food
and restrain from eating outside food
in order to maintain one's physical health and well being
. Add a hyphen
well-being
Thus
, it is preferred to have food
freshly prepared at home then
to replace Replace the word
than
with
Correct pronoun usage
it with
food
bought from outside.
In conclusion, the benefits of comfort and the variety of options which are now easily available through technology have converted most people into consuming junk food
as main
meal. Add an article
a main
the main
Furthermore
leading to harming the health of such
individuals. However
, in view of the advantages, the trend of eating outside food
is estimated to only grow rapidly all over the world.Submitted by samyuktha.gagga on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...