The Growth Of Online Shopping Will One Day Lead To All Shops In Towns And Cities Closing. Do you agree or disagree?
The growing reasons for it. First of all, E-shopping offers
shoppers
interest Change noun form
shoppers'
shopper's
into
buying goods online Change preposition
in
have
increased form the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
last
couple of years and the trend will only move into
an Change preposition
in
upwards
direction in the years to come, which could lead to Replace the word
upward
closure
of outlets in urban and Add an article
the closure
semi urban
places. In my view, I agree with Add a hyphen
semi-urban
this
statement and this
essay will discussCorrect article usage
the
thier
customers with Correct your spelling
their
plethora
of options under one roof to make the right choice of purchase. To elaborate, people can easily find a product online because there are plenty of websites and thousands of products to suit their best fit. Add an article
a plethora
However
, A window shopper might face challenges to get the right product because of the lack of variety offered.For instance
, a study from the World Business Organization showed that due
to smooth process of buying from online websites have impacted Change preposition
apply
the
local business, because of which there has been a 10% drop every year Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
in
consumers
visits to a traditional marketplace. Fix the agreement mistake
consumer
Secondly
, A buffet of Services offered by online platforms such
as delivery of goods at thier
doorsteps and return the products if you are not convinced with the item. Correct your spelling
their
Moreover
, Such
offerings have developed a good image into
the Change preposition
in
mind
of the buyers to be more inclined towards E-shopping. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
This
does not stop here People also
receive products at a cheaper price as compared to the local vendors
stores, and if the customers do not like the product they have an option Change to a genitive case
vendor's
vendors'
availabe
to return it and receive Correct your spelling
available
the
refund as per the policies of the company's web page. Correct article usage
a
To conclude
, In the recent past the literate percentage of the population over the world have
been highly engaged with Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the
internet shopping, and I believe in the years to come it will only expand and there will be an absolute dominance of online websites over the local stores leading them to run for survival.Correct article usage
apply
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