Many things which were done in the home by hand in the past are now done by machines. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Industrial
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The industrial
revolution
has changed Correct your spelling
Revolution
world
upside down.Since Correct article usage
the world
than
usage of machines Replace the word
then
have
been incorporated Change the verb form
has
in
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into
process
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the process
making
so many Change preposition
of making
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
those
were made using traditional methods. I firmly believe it has more benefits than drawbacks. Both the pros and cons are discussed in the following paragraphs.
Out of all the positives,foremost is, precision. In big Correct pronoun usage
that
companies
manufacturing is done on Add a comma
,companies
large
scale which requires accuracy which can be achieved using a mechanical device. Add an article
a large
Besides
this
, using instruments for production save the
time which is a must in today's Correct article usage
apply
fast moving
world. Add a hyphen
fast-moving
For example
, a famous clothing company used to prepare only 500 metres of clothing material in a day in 1940 but as of now, it is generating hundred
folds of what Change the article
a hundred
is
was used to be.
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it
On the other hand
, automation is the prominent reason of
many people Change preposition
for
loosing
their job. As a machine can do Replace the word
losing
work
of many persons, big industries are now roping more in automation than Correct article usage
the work
a
human Correct article usage
apply
being
.Fix the agreement mistake
beings
For instance
, Tesla a leading company in automobiles has released its 3000 workers and now their work is being done by 30 robots.Another disadvantage is that,
machines, sometimes Remove the comma
apply
costs
higher as not only it consumes more electricity but Correct subject-verb agreement
cost
also
its
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their
maintainance
and Correct your spelling
maintenance
repairing
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repair
is
costlier.
In conclusion,Correct subject-verb agreement
are
instrumentation
is what Add an article
the instrumentation
a
world needs today but it should be kept in mind that it should not Correct article usage
the
deprieve
someone of his/her bread and butter.Correct your spelling
deprive
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...