Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter : [ Suggest how you could help her in her home. I Say why you would like to do this work. • Explain when you will and will not be available.

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Dear Mr Barrett, I am writing to you with regards to the advertisement given by you in The Times yesterday.

To begin

with, I am Sophia, living at flat 1,536, Canterberry 2036. I read in the advertisement that you would look for someone to help you in the kitchen with the preparation of dinner.

Firstly

, I am clear that I am doing the cooking course and now I am in my final year. I know how to prepare Western cuisine and without any doubt help you to make dinner. Moving on, If I get the job,

this

would really help me to manage my budget and I will

also

gain some part-time experience through

this

work which helping me throughout my career.

Finally

, my college time is 9 AM to 5 PM and I am available all the evenings from 6 June except weekends.

Furthermore

, please feel free to contact me at Sophia [email protected] for any

further

information. I hope you would like my profile and give me a chance to explore my practical skill. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sophia

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