The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart below represents information about five vital unsimilar groups which contain different nations in the year 2009.
Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is evidently
that Food,Replace the word
evident
Hausing
,Correct your spelling
Housing
Transportation
are the biggest expenses nearly in all countries which provides on the chart. The leader in spending on food Correct word choice
and Transportation
is
Japan. Correct your spelling
in
However
, the leader in spending on housing is the United States
. Also
, Canada spends the most on transportation. Healthcare shows the lowest figures of all categories. Clothing represents a little higher proportion compared to healthcare.
The lowest expenditure on food is 14% ( United States
) and the highest is 24% (Japan). Housing costs shows
slightly higher figures in all countries. Canada spends the least of all countries in Correct subject-verb agreement
show
this
category 20% . In contrast
, the United States
spend the most 26
% . In the transportation group Canada spends the most 20% and Japan the least 10%. In terms of Change preposition
at 26
healthcare
the United Add a comma
,healthcare
States
is a leader ( around 8%) and the United Kingdom is the most economical lower than 5%. Canadians spend the most money from their income 7%. While
,
citizens of the United Remove the comma
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States
spend the lowest amount of money 4%.Submitted by slobodanatol83 on
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