The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart below represents information about five vital unsimilar groups which contain different nations in the year 2009.  Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is
evidently
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that Food,
Hausing
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Housing
,
Transportation
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and Transportation
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are the biggest expenses nearly in all countries which provides on the chart. The leader in spending on food
is
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in
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Japan.
However
, the leader in spending on housing is the United
States
.
Also
, Canada spends the most on transportation. Healthcare shows the lowest figures of all categories. Clothing represents a little higher proportion compared to healthcare. The lowest expenditure on food is 14% ( United
States
) and the highest is 24% (Japan). Housing costs
shows
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slightly higher figures in all countries. Canada spends the least of all countries in
this
category 20% .
In contrast
, the United
States
spend the most
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% . In the transportation group Canada spends the most 20% and Japan the least 10%. In terms of
healthcare
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,healthcare
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the United
States
is a leader ( around 8%) and the United Kingdom is the most economical lower than 5%. Canadians spend the most money from their income 7%.
While
,
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citizens of the United
States
spend the lowest amount of money 4%.
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