Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this a negative or positive development?
At present days it seems like
machines
are entering at home as well as
at work places
. Correct your spelling
workplaces
Significance
of robot is augmenting Correct article usage
The significance
day
by day
; however
, it has some detrimental effects which can’t be overlooked. Following
essays will show Correct article usage
The following
its
adverse effect of modern Change the word
the
robots
.
For a start, it is invariably true that people have become lazy day
by day
due to
surge
in the number of modern Correct article usage
the surge
machines
at home like washing machines
, dish washer
, and many more. Fix the agreement mistake
washers
In addition
, machines
have not only made human life easier but also
does
work within Unnecessary verb
apply
minimal
time ratio. It has some disadvantages as well like unhealthy body, long term illness. The main culprit behind it is the modern Correct article usage
a minimal
robots
which disables
human beings to perform Change the verb form
disable
such
day to
Add a hyphen
day-to-day
day
tasks like washing clothes, cleaning dishes such
activities which allows
our body to move that allows to burn some calories that Correct subject-verb agreement
allow
helps
to reduce illness. Change the verb form
help
This
could be exemplified as recent reports of hospital shows
that there is more number of cities patient than compared Change the verb form
show
to
Change preposition
apply
village
. Because, neither they use Add an article
a village
such
modern machines
nor they are machine friendly which allows them to stay fit.
Having said that, in factories, laboratories and in mechanical sectors there are lots of contemporary machines
which directly affects
the employment rate of people which is Correct subject-verb agreement
affect
alarming
concern for Add an article
an alarming
nation
. There is enough compelling that many automobile factories started achieving their target by Add an article
the nation
robots
which does
repetitive work effectively and efficiently. Change the verb form
do
Besides
this
, such
factories can’t afford such
employees which engender
the survival of the staff. Correct subject-verb agreement
engenders
In addition
, numerous researcher’s
Change noun form
researchers
belief
that half of the world’s population will lose jobs in Replace the word
believe
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the nest
nest
fifty years. Future technologies Correct your spelling
next
such
as artificial intelligence is
capable of creating Change the verb form
are
robots
smarter than the
human, which can endanger mankind and other lives on earth. Certainly, artificial intelligence can play Correct article usage
apply
very
crucial role in many informatics technology departments.
Add an article
a very
To conclude
,
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apply
presents
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present
robots
can help to save time and money in many places but it also
causes Correct article usage
a substantially
substantially
decrease in Change the word
substantial
Change the article
a number
the number
number of
employment which leads to Correct quantifier usage
apply
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a shrink
shrink
Change the verb form
shrinking
the
GDP. Change preposition
in the
Nevertheless
, physical movement of body
in performing Correct article usage
the body
day to
Add a hyphen
day-to-day
day
task
can Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
helps
to reduce Change the verb form
help
to fall
sick rather than using hi-tech Change the verb form
falling
machines
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