Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing to you in concern to the advertisement you published to find someone for helping you with your household duties next summer . I am a student at the University of English
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, I speak English well and like domestic work . I like to keep things tidy and clean . I am good at laundry and ironing so it is appropriate to work for me since I used to help my mother . I am free from 7 am until 2 pm but it is better to have Friday as a rest day . It will be delightful to meet you to talk more about any enquiries when it is convenient. Yours faithfully, Asmaa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Domestic chores
  • Culinary skills
  • Horticulture
  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
  • Flexible schedule
  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
  • Punctuality
  • Reliability
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