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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given picture depicts the circulation of
salmon
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life
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 during the period of over nine years.
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, it obviously can be seen that there are three main phases in the
salmon
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’s mature progress.
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, the cycle
life
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 of
salmon
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 records that
salmon
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 inhabits the freshwater area in the two early periods of its
life
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 before moving to the sea in the
last
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 stage. In the first period of
salmon
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life
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, the
salmon
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 eggs are covered by reeds and small stones under the riverbed.
This
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 stage lasts for approximately 5 to 6 months at the upper
river
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 with slow-moving. The eggs
then
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 are cracked and turned into the baby
salmon
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 which is called ‘fry’. The fry is incredibly tiny with
the
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a
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 size of 3-8 cm but they are ready to relocate to the lower
river
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 and begin the new progress of their
life
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. The fry
have
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 lived in the fast-flowing area of the
river
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 for about four years and their size grows to 12-15 cm.
After
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this
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 development, they are called ‘smolt’. The smolt
then
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leave
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leaves
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 the freshwater area and move to a wider environment for their maturity. In the period of approximately five years, the smolt
settle
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settles
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 in the open sea. Their size is up to 70-76 cm and now they are ‘adult
salmon
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’. The mature
salmon
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 continue their
life
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 in the ocean before turning back to the upper
river
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 to prepare for their reproduction.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, life, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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