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Some parents prefer that their children study abroad, to what extent do you agree with this view?

#parents #children #study
I would like to complete my
research
 on extracting
tomato
 seed
oil
. I believe that
Japan
 has many possibilities to offer researchers, and I would like to complete my
research
 on extracting
tomato
 seed
oil
. As
Japan
 produces more than 80,000 tons of
tomato
 juice, and the percentage increases every year, which increases the
amount
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 of unexploited seeds. Since the seeds contain an
oil
 content of up to 20%, so I would like to complete my
research
 in
Japan
 and devise non-traditional ways to extract
tomato
 seed
oil
.
In addition
 to the use of nanotechnology in encapsulating the
oil
 of
tomato
 seeds to increase its shelf life and protect it from oxidation. The transfer of scientific knowledge in a specialized
field
 from
Japan
 to
Egypt
, especially in the agricultural
field
 and the use and recycling of agricultural
waste
, as
Japan
 is a pioneer in
this
field
, and
Egypt
 is primarily an agricultural country and has many problems related to the exploitation of agricultural
waste
 and its use as non-traditional sources of food. 3-
Japan
 produces tomatoes by
a
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percentage5.6%, and carrots by a percentage
4.2
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 of the total vegetable production. These sources have residues of up to 50%. Natural pigments
such
 as carotene and lycopene can be extracted from
this
waste
 and used as natural
colorants
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 after encapsulating them by nanotechnology.
Egypt
also
 needs more
research
 in
this
field
. It is worth mentioning that
Egypt
The
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 fourth country in the world in the production of tomatoes and has a large proportion of
waste
, which causes major environmental problems.
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