Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The picture depicts the expansion of a
village
named
Chorleywood
over the period of 126 years starting in 1868.
Overall
, the changes in the
village
were accompanied by the induction of new roadways, and the map records four periods of development. Between 1868 and 1883, the
village
of
Chorleywood
was situated along one of the main roads. Nowadays,
Chorleywood
Park and Golf Course have been erected next to the original location of the
village
. From 1883 to 1922, the
village
was widened to the south and became much bigger.
Additionally
, there was a construction of a railway and the
Chorleywood
station in 1909, which allowed the villagers to commute conveniently from west to east. In the next period, the map recorded the development of the
village
along the railway and its
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in size. A motorway was constructed in 1970 in order to facilitate transport from north to south. From 1970, the
village
expanded around some situations where the motorway intersects the railway and one of the main roads.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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