Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The picture depicts the expansion of a
village
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named
Chorleywood
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over the period of 126 years starting in 1868.
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, the changes in the
village
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were accompanied by the induction of new roadways, and the map records four periods of development. Between 1868 and 1883, the
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of
Chorleywood
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was situated along one of the main roads. Nowadays,
Chorleywood
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Park and Golf Course have been erected next to the original location of the
village
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. From 1883 to 1922, the
village
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was widened to the south and became much bigger.
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, there was a construction of a railway and the
Chorleywood
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station in 1909, which allowed the villagers to commute conveniently from west to east. In the next period, the map recorded the development of the
village
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along the railway and its
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in size. A motorway was constructed in 1970 in order to facilitate transport from north to south. From 1970, the
village
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expanded around some situations where the motorway intersects the railway and one of the main roads.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, chorleywood with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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