In your school, one of your friends has been feeling down and demotivated. You take it as your responsibility to cheer him/her up and do this via a Birthday party invitation. Write to your classmates and talk about organizing the party. Please include • the reason behind the party • the location of the party • discuss any other arrangements You should write between 150-200 words.

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Dear Zen, I am exhilarated by an idea that just came to my mind about Nia’s ill mental condition and I have the perfect fix! I am assuming you already know that Nia is very depressed lately as she is not able to adjust herself to

this

country and would rather go back. She evidently does not comprehend what she is missing here. I came to know that her birthday is approaching. How about we hold a party for her at Queen's Pub on High Street? Not only would it be an awesome spot to loosen up but, it will

also

be easy on our pockets when we treat her as I have heard we have nice discounts for students there. Could you please go ahead and collaborate with the others and circle back with me regarding the time you all come up with? Remember, we have to keep the spotlight of the party on Nia since we need to cheer her up mainly. Get back to me if you have any alternative ideas. I will be awaiting your response. Best regards, KJ

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