The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The map illustrates the changes in a town post the development of a hydraulic
dam
in 2010.
Overall
, it can be inferred that the construction of the dam
resulted in the loss of natural diversity. It is also
apparent that post the manufacture of the dam
, the town became more advanced in infrastructure.
With regard to natural diversity, the township had a forest, rare plants and animals, and irrigated farmlands in 1990. However
, after the introduction of the dam
in 2010, these were removed to accommodate other modern buildings such
as electric towers and the dam
itself.
In addition
, There were certain additions were done to the area. A hotel was constructed in the northeast direction and a lake in the east. Furthermore
, the villages were shifted from the east to the southeastern region after the creation of the dam
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