The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.

The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.
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The pie chart represents information
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the
number
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of
women
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who are in
poverty
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and the bar chart provides data
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poverty
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rates by gender. Looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the biggest
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of
women
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in
poverty
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are single
women
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with no dependent children ( 54%).
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, the lowest figures in
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pie chart are married
women
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with no dependent child (8%).
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, the percentage of married
women
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with children is 12%.
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,
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number
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of
women
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who are unmarried and have children is 26%. In terms of the rate of
poverty
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relating to gender and
age
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, the highest percentage of females in the group aged from 18 to 24 ( nearly 22% ).
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, the highest proportion
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poverty
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among males is the group aged under five years old. The lowest proportion of males is in the
age
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groups of 45 to 54 ( 7% ) , between 55 and 59 ( 8%) and older than 75 ( 6%).
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, compared to females the lowest
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of females in the
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groups 45-54 ( 8%) and 55-59 ( almost 10%) . The biggest contrast between femininity and male is the
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group from 18 to 24 the difference is five per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, women, poverty, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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