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Cosmopolitanism is generally associated with the concept that all of humanity could belong to a single community.

#cosmopolitanism #concept #humanity #community
The new way to look at the migrant experience is transnationalism. It can help both migrant and local communities.
Firstly
, migrant organisations promote the migrant
country
 within the
host
 one.
This
 is a way to exchange knowledge about other cultures. When the
migrants
 come to the
host
country
 , they learn all about the language, food, traditions and many more. The locals,
on the other hand
, learn all about the
migrants
'
country
 too and promotes.
it
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for
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tourism which can help the
economics
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 of the home
country
.
Secondly
, one thing that can help
migrants
 experience in the
host
country
 is the Internet. By using it, the guests can easily access their family and friends, learn about the things happening
home
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 by watching the news and would be feeling calmer.
On the other hand
, even though the
migrants
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 society
participate
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 fully in the
host
 society, they could be isolated. When being lonely,
this
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could lead to going back home, suicide or terrorist attacks. The isolation of a whole society is a very serious thing all over the world and
that is
 why there are migrant neighbourhoods in most of the big cities. All things considered,
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the migrant
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migrant
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 can help the
host
country
 by making more
workhands
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work hands
, giving knowledge about different cultures and increasing the population of the
host
country
.
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