Some people feel that developments in science are happening so fast that it is difficult for people to appreciate the effects of such advances .Others feel we should trust scientists more and stop worrying.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Now in 21 century, developments in
science
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significantly and it's become very difficult for people to appreciate the effects of
such
advances because it's not easy to show step by step what they are doing
on
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with
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that
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such
development.
While
other
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others
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feel that we should trust scientists more and stop worrying because we get many benefits from
science
.
On the other hand
,
Science
is very important for the world of
science
and technology in modern
life
.They made our
life
easier and
comfortable
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.
Science
plays an important role in our daily
life
nowadays.We can see the
science
benefits in many ways in our daily
life
,
such
as
,
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Electricity, Machines, transportation and in the medical field as well. Electricity is a great invention , we got a
lots
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benefits
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from that invention .Now some
place
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are trying to use
robot
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robots
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instead
of human power , for
medical
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field now scientists found many ways
for
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to
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new
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medication, new
treatment
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treatments
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ways and
prediction
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predictions
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to protect from the spread of diseases
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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