Some people feel that developments in science are happening so fast that it is difficult for people to appreciate the effects of such advances .Others feel we should trust scientists more and stop worrying.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #developments #science #effects #advances #trust #scientists

Now in 21 century, developments in

science

are develop

Change the verb form

are developed

are developing

show examples

significantly and it's become very difficult for people to appreciate the effects of

such

advances because it's not easy to show step by step what they are doing

Change preposition

with

show examples

that

Correct determiner usage

apply

show examples

such

development.

While

other

Correct pronoun usage

others

show examples

feel that we should trust scientists more and stop worrying because we get many benefits from

science

On the other hand

Science

is very important for the world of

science

and technology in modern

life

.They made our

life

easier and

comfortable

Correct quantifier usage

more comfortable

show examples

Science

plays an important role in our daily

life

nowadays.We can see the

science

benefits in many ways in our daily

life

such

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

Electricity, Machines, transportation and in the medical field as well. Electricity is a great invention , we got a

lots

Correct quantifier usage

lot

show examples

benefits

Change preposition

of benefits

show examples

from that invention .Now some

place

Fix the agreement mistake

places

show examples

are trying to use

robot

Fix the agreement mistake

robots

show examples

instead

of human power , for

medical

Add an article

the medical

show examples

field now scientists found many ways

for

Change preposition

show examples

new

Add an article

a new

show examples

medication, new

treatment

Fix the agreement mistake

treatments

show examples

ways and

prediction

Fix the agreement mistake

predictions

show examples

to protect from the spread of diseases

Submitted by eiphaung32 on Mon Apr 24 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

169 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
You want to sell some of your furniture and you think one of your friends might be interested to buy it. Write a letter to this friend. Why you are selling it. Describe the furniture he/she might be interested in. Invite your friend to have a look.
I hope this letter finds you in great condition and you are doing well, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to offer to you my esthetic table.
<4
band
countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This line graph displays some informaitons about the population with percentage in four Asian countries staying in cities between 1970 to 2020, and the perdictions for 2030 and 2040.
7.5
band
Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to ask you about developing a website for my business.
4.5
band
In recent years, there has been a significant advancement in AI and automation technologies. Some argue that these technologies will lead to widespread job displacement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In past years there is a continuous increase in the use of artificial intelligence to complete various tasks in our daily life. According to some people this urge in increase of these technologies will cause lots of troubles to upcoming generations. I agree with this statement and in the upcoming paragraph I will describe some points to justify my opinion.
<4
band
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?
The given illustration shows informations about the price of bananas in four different countries between the years 1994 and 2004.

Some people feel that developments in science are happening so fast that it is difficult for people to appreciate the effects of such advances .Others feel we should trust scientists more and stop worrying.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

You want to sell some of your furniture and you think one of your friends might be interested to buy it. Write a letter to this friend. Why you are selling it. Describe the furniture he/she might be interested in. Invite your friend to have a look.

countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.

In recent years, there has been a significant advancement in AI and automation technologies. Some argue that these technologies will lead to widespread job displacement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?