The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The charts give information about the marriage and divorce proportion in America over the period of 30 years, starting in 2000.
In general, the total
number
of married couples experienced a downward trend, whereas
the proportion of divorced people fluctuated over the period shown.
It can be clearly seen that the number
of marriages started at 2.5 million
in 1970 and remained stable at this
figure until 1980. At this
point, there was a slight decrease in the total number
of couples who decided to marry each other in America between 1980 to 2000, from 2.5 million
to 2 million
.
On the other hand
, the trend for the statistic of divorces is quite different with marriages. Nevertheless
, the number
of divorces increased to 1 million
before reaching the highest point in 1980, at nearly 1.5 million
. Finally
, the figure decreased gradually to nearly 1 million
and finished at 1 million
in 2000.Submitted by minhnx2 on
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